1. 写作方面

写作百搭框架

段落	主要内容
提出问题	背景介绍 引出话题
分析问题	试图分析成因/影响/具体分析
解决问题	呼吁解决问题/重申观点建议/展望

首段百搭框架

①There is a much-told Chinese saying:haste makes waste.It suggests a universally acknowledged idea that individuals should never make quick decisions in terms of important matters, such as pursuing a higher academic degree in one of the top universities in US,moving to a new business in a city thousands of miles away from their families,or purchasing a 50-square -meter shop in a CBD due to open in the next year.

②It is commonly agreed that people rising to the top through their own efforts have many things in common. They are self-encouraging, stick to goals, dare to a refuse,seek win-win solutions, tend to stand in others’shoes,and so on. In my opinion, among these shared traits,holding on to one’sgoalsis the most important.

中间段百搭句型

The reasons for this abound，but two/three stand out.

When it comes to the causes of this, several factors/points are at play.

...can be analyzed in the following aspects.

中间段百搭思路

学习/工作/生活

物质/精神/情感

自己/他人/社会

中间段百搭框架

This idea can be analyzed in the following aspects.If a student rushes to do homework, he/she is more likely to make mistakes than those thinking carefully before writing down the results.So he/she may probably be required to rewrite it--obviously a waste of time.Likewise, if a worker produces acertain number of products in as half the time as an average work does,the rate of qualified ones may be just as half as usual.As a result,he/she should spend more time to make up for the waste.

尾端百搭框架

It's high time for everyone to attach importance to this problem.The first line of defense is to raise awareness about the impacts of ( haste ) on individual development.Also,the cultural community can produce literature,films,songs,etc, to have people from all walks of life understand that slow is fast.

2. 翻译方面

译文与原文内容一致

译文符合英语书面语表达习惯

避免病句——检查名词单复数、动词时态

重要短语

中国梦 the Chinese Dream

双一流大学Double First-Class university,

人类命运共同体A community with shared futures for humanity

一带一路倡议The Belt and Road initiative

共享经济sharing economy

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无现金支付cashless payment

中国高铁China high-speed railway

民生people's livelihood

文化自信cultural self confidence

中国制造2025 Made in China 2025

自媒We-media

物联网Internet of Things

人工智能artificial intelligence

虚拟现实virtual reality

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城乡一体化urban-rural integration

个人信用记录personal credit records

创新性人才innovative talent

技巧一：时刻转换思维

政府还计划建造一批水循环利用工厂和蓄洪池，并制止违章建筑以改善环境。

违章建筑：forbidden house/buildings/construction Or houses that are not allowed by law(如果修饰词想不起来或者不会写就用从句代替）.

水循环利用工厂：plants/factories that deal with waster/dirty water so that it can be used again.

蓄洪池：store/flood/pond storage

Flood storage/storing pond of Yangtze river =the pond that is used to store the water from Yangtze river.

技巧二：使用被动语态

1. 被

2. 得到/遭到/受到

3. 得以

如果这一目标得以实现...

If the goal/aim is achieves/reached/accomplished...

技巧三：使用定语从句

1. 前文，这...

2. 前文，其...

3. 前文，缺少主语的句子

这里还有许多温泉 其泉水有助于防治皮肤病

There are also hot springs，whose water is conductive to the prevention and cure of skin disease.

希望长寿的人却经常上山,因为山上生长着许多草药

However, those wishing to live longer often climbs the mountain,where grow many herbs/grass used in medicine especially some real kinds.